There were some top entries, some of you sent in full songs, others kept to the minimum but certainly impressed. So after getting the opinions of 3 trusted friends and of course, my self
... the winner is ....
SneakyKiddo
For a great verse with a lot of emotion and truth as well as being very well written. ( Pm me your address and contact information and MixtapesOne.com will ship out the mixtape to you ASAP ). Congratulations girl, here it is:
Listen, my family's broken up to two three and four
From the five of us now left with me alone to carry on
My perfect family of lyin and cheatin on each other
For money, name, fame and position of power
Another why and a reason we siblings fight
Let me tell you now that our unity has died
Now my rage's let go and its left to sizzle
Let it fire up, power up and left to fizzle
Til the world knows the motherfuckin truth
Ive had enough of living in a suicidal booth
Im ok but as you can see all the holes in my wall
Are newly created each day to relieve all this tensions and all
So I smile, pretend and I fake through though its unwise
But Im carrying on living, on til I break and take my own life
But I got too much pride to be breaking down without a fight
So I'll keep on going till Ive had too much pain to bear to hide
Sigh, Its insane the way my moms such an egoistic person
And my dad only knows how to gamble with his earnin
My two brothers somehow, well they care for me
But I couldn't care less for what they do for me
Coz once all of them promised me a good comfy life
Now my lifes gone though I aint got a sharp knife
But I was stabbed in the heart by all their fakiness
If theres such a word, then let me add another one for their shittiness
Coz you see my life its like a mystery
Its like a puzzle with an immense bit of shit in it
Coz when we're around relatives they fake they know every inch of me
They tell people of my life, my problems, childhood and my history
But they left out the bad points especially my misery
So I feel like a rotten apple when in their range of proximity
Then when Im close to them, I feel like they're all stangers
I don't know why Im saying this but it's like my family's endangered
Im just waiting for my parents' divorce or maybe another situation
Coz anyway sooner or later, all this will lead the family to extinction
As Im getting even more impatient, ARGH there goes my temper
Fuck it, one day I might go psycho and kill my family members
Just because Im a girl in my family, well it gets to me
When everybody thinks im too nice and sweet to even be
All suicidal, maniacal and crazy enough to kill
I'll show them me when I get really really pissed
Especially when my family's a total nonsense see
If you were in my shoes, tell me how you would feel
Everyday when I get home, first thing I hear is my parents arguing
About the money, car or about my father cheating with another woman
Just a year ago I got news he married another bitch
Like one bitch wasn't enough for me to deal with
Man I could write a whole book of my family shit
500 Pages minimum, that shit's gonna be a hit
Coz like every other family, there's some betrayal going on
In mine, its gonna me, as Im writing TRshady my family song
It's a betrayal coz I swore my mom I wouldn't tell nobody bout our probs
But the problems too much to handle, especially for a little girl to handle
So fuck it, that's my life, well right now basically my family's shattered
Tattered and torn, no more chances, its over, my family's broken
Remember to be a good sport, thanks to everyone who entered. A shout out to Infinite_Stan who I know put a load of effort into his ( a 5 verse song! ) but I felt it wasn't as consistent and overall it's about Quality and not just Quantity. For those who didn't win, don't worry there will be other competitions on the way ...
congrats! 
