You Don't Know Song

[TimmyHoover]

I Song I wrote and recorded with Schenk.
I was Heading towards an eminem style.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HXqf0l-IJDE

I'd loved to hear your feedback.

[*Illicit*]

Not bad bro, the beats alright but I think you could get a better one

the rhymes are pretty good, seems like the tempo of the beat is kinda slow seems like it was made with fruity loops or something. also this slow tempo kinda makes the flow seem slow but I also understand you were aiming for a slower flow.


not too bad keep practicing man, if you made the beat keep making them

keep writing rhymes and practicing that too

I wouldn't say this is ready to make you famous or nothing but its not bad like I said if you keep getting better and practicing you could develop some talent

heres a tip try your own style and try not to mimic em's as much. a flow is usually much more natural when its your own. try getting some instrumentals getting somewhere private and just freestyle see how the words come out and kinda figure out where your natural flow is.

[Kez]

Why's this in Entertainment?

[hype]

Why's this in Entertainment?

he's new; give him a break.

[Kez]

Why's this in Entertainment?

he's new; give him a break.

lol no

[*Illicit*]

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^really?

[Recovery2010]

I enjoyed it, liked the lyrics