by Slimm » Apr 9th, '11, 12:59
It's always hard to make a sig when you try to put in two focal points. I see what you tried to do, and it's not bad by any means but creating a clear focal point is important. Like you could try to throw the renders in the middle and the black spaces on the outside. Smudge the renders a bit so that they look like one, make it abstract.
Knowing myself, I never go back to things I already made cause it's a pain in the ass, but just giving some constructive feedback.
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