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Creative Writing FeedBack & College Crib

Postby J.R. » Aug 23rd, '13, 22:49

Suggestion 1.) Change College Crib to -> "Work & School Discussion" or something along those lines to increase discussion.

2.) In CW, require this template when posting feedback, or say something like, "If your feedback doesn't match something similar to this feed, loosely, you'll be asked to edit it before you can post a piece." This is so everyone can get adequate feed.

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Re: Creative Writing FeedBack & College Crib

Postby Just Silver » Aug 23rd, '13, 23:14

its hard enough to get feed that would probably make it even harder
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Re: Creative Writing FeedBack & College Crib

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 24th, '13, 07:03

I like the CW feed idea but nobody would do that. People don't take feeding too seriously anymore, and that partially includes myself. Trying to get better at that doe
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Re: Creative Writing FeedBack & College Crib

Postby Eedee » Aug 24th, '13, 07:05

Mr.DGAF wrote:I like the CW feed idea but nobody would do that. People don't take feeding too seriously anymore, and that partially includes myself. Trying to get better at that doe


I like it. Nice rhyming and flow was good too. Keep it up. :y:
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Re: Creative Writing FeedBack & College Crib

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 24th, '13, 07:06

Thanks mane
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