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Oh, I Need You (POEM)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 28th, '10, 06:49

So tired
The battery’s weak
I need a charger
Oh, I need you

So painful
The HP’s low
I need a potion
Oh, I need you

So sick
The box’s empty
I need food
Oh, I need you

So desperate
The cycle’s slow
I need air
Oh, I need you

:laughing: That's so random. :laughing:
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Re: Oh, I Need You (POEM)

Postby Bistnal » Jan 28th, '10, 07:35

yeah, that was random. Interesting I guess. I lol'd at the second stanza/verse about HP.
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Re: Oh, I Need You (POEM)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 28th, '10, 07:37

Bistnal wrote:yeah, that was random. Interesting I guess. I lol'd at the second stanza/verse about HP.

Word. thanks for the feed. ;)
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Re: Oh, I Need You (POEM)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 28th, '10, 07:50

Will you marry me, Fish? :flowers:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Oh, I Need You (POEM)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 28th, '10, 07:52

Relapse.LP wrote:Will you marry me, Fish? :flowers:

blahahahahhaahahhaa!

Ask my cat.
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LMAO. JK. Thanks for reading. :)
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Re: Oh, I Need You (POEM)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 28th, '10, 07:53

haha that was funny :D
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Re: Oh, I Need You (POEM)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 28th, '10, 07:56

macdaddy019967 wrote:haha that was funny :D

LMFAO. thanks for reading man. :D
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