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Postby DOPE » Jan 31st, '06, 11:42

i split raps, chew em in half
if Dre signs me, ima flip the bird to the Aftermath staff
stickin it up like i never stuck up two middle finger nails
i drop a single each day, it be lhot as sahara females
like the the bird flu episode
ima let it go, im in a reppin mode
step on toes , i crush em
i take a shit, in all public toilets, i never flush em
sleep naked at nite, with my nutts slipin out the sheets
in the dark they look like boogey man, chippin out the trees
i punch in the mirror have the glass shoved in my hands
stand up side down, n fuck a bitch, she aint never bin loved in this stance
ima steal all ur feeders n all ur diapers
cuz when my baby be on the way, i dont get my chic hyper
some dude wants me to spark his hash, ima hand em a gass less liter
run away n laff at him, like the situation never bin this titer
n if anydude wants to beef with me, n trys to put me in fear
ima set thee alarm for 5AM, reach 5 minutes earlier, n tape the clock to his ear!
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 31st, '06, 12:40

lol that was funny u had some good punch's in there nice job
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Postby DOPE » Jan 31st, '06, 13:47

thanx mayn!
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Postby X-Ray » Jan 31st, '06, 14:15

1 this dosnt belong here and 2 witch punchlines :zipped:
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 31st, '06, 21:02

these punch's
"like the the bird flu episode"
and
"sleep naked at nite, with my nutts slipin out the sheets
in the dark they look like boogey man, chippin out the trees"
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Postby em16 » Feb 2nd, '06, 10:40

cool mayn.. nice freestyle... :D
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