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Pickin' Up The Piece's

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Pickin' Up The Piece's

Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:15

(verse 1)
I can't sleep cause' of violent dreams//
I wake up with silent screams//
I toss and turn at night//
I got a burning fright//
of the prophesies of revelation//
that are being reveled in are generating//
foretold and comin' to pass//
I spent my whole life tryin' to run from the past//
mabey I was runnin' to fast//

(course)
cause' now I'm stuck pickin' up the piece's of a broken past//
thats been shadder'd like broken glass//
I want da pain to go away but dat might take a while//
so for now I'll just fake a smile//
cause' now I'm stuck pickin' up the piece's of a broken past//
thats been shadder'd like broken glass//
I want da pain to go away but dat might take a while//
so for now I'll just fake a smile//

(verse 2)
It's sad when it's ur own life u dispise//
all I've known r enemy's in disguise//
I left my heat open//
only to find that the people I trusted were wolf's in sheeps clothen//
and those wolf's deserve oscar's 4 the role they play//
cause' there better then most movie star's that are out 2day//
they play the role of friends and it's such a good portrayal//
cause' they were the least I suspect'd to be the cause of betrayal//
but their works will never prevail//

(course)
and now I'm stuck pickin' up the piece's of a broken past//
thats been shadder'd like broken glass//
I want da pain to go away but dat might take a while//
so for now I'll just fake a smile//
cause' now I'm stuck pickin' up the piece's of a broken past//
thats been shadder'd like broken glass//
I want da pain to go away but dat might take a while//
so for now I'll just fake a smile//

(verse 3)
I'll never trust again//
like I trusted then//
or like I trusted them//
cause' lookin' back//
all I see is a crooked past//
full of lies and deceit//
and enemy's I tried to defeat//
emotional pain I tried to delete//
but my emotions r a puzzle I can't complete//
cause' there's alway's a missin' peice//

(course)
and now I'm stuck pickin' up the piece's of a broken past//
thats been shadder'd like broken glass//
I want da pain to go away but dat might take a while//
so for now I'll just fake a smile//
cause' now I'm stuck pickin' up the piece's of a broken past//
thats been shadder'd like broken glass//
I want da pain to go away but dat might take a while//
so for now I'll just fake a smile//
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Postby Ivy » Feb 13th, '06, 01:26

Me like, me like....I think it should be sung aswell...did I say I liked??? :happy:
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:28

I would sing it but I can't sing I can only rap mabey I can sell it to some1 else and they can sing it anyway thanx 4 replyin' :D
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Postby MuNxMuN » Feb 13th, '06, 01:30

i like it :happy: i think it would be pretty good if it was rapped
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:33

MuNxMuN wrote:i like it :happy: i think it would be pretty good if it was rapped


thanx that wat I was planing on doing rappin' it I just rapped it and I think it sounds better when I rap it then when I sing it mabey thats because I can't sing
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 13th, '06, 01:34

you gonna audio this Ep?

you should tis excellent :worship: :flower:
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 13th, '06, 01:34

$0 R3@L wrote:you gonna audio this Ep?

you should tis excellent :worship: :flower:


yea I'll audio it as soon as I get a mic
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