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Postby Golden » Feb 22nd, '06, 23:30

You cant see the feelings i feel, lets make a deal, dont ever care again, you hear. I dont need nun to have fun, i have myself.
Dont make me go to work,cuz i wont.
i just wanne stay in bed, but insted im up,pretending.That life is god, should i do this or not?should i just lay here and rot in pieces, jesus, cant somebody save me.save me from this pain, this missery.shit this is laime, Things will never be the same...
Yeah...keep,keep it real
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Postby mcmiked » Feb 23rd, '06, 05:50

thats some alright stuff man, deep shit
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Postby Rae » Feb 25th, '06, 00:50

not bad at all :8)
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Postby Ivy » Feb 25th, '06, 00:52

That was pretty decent...keep elevating..and posting your work.... :)
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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