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they wanna hate me

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they wanna hate me

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 6th, '06, 02:05

oh boy, they wanna hate, thats ok with me
cuz i will take no seat, i'll make u sweet
like cake while im paid my cheese
ya fake, believe
i wont lay one knee
save the beef for ya baby please
or maybe we wont have a day to see
after ya decay asleep
ya d.o.a. mc, ya only way you'll be on A t.v.
ya enslaved ya dreams to the G.O.V.
so bring the peace cuz i dont think youll reach
the great elite from ya crazy weak, tastless
speaking brain ya keep grey
ya need to fade:
decease cuz ya play ya schemes n display ya steam
just like a raging teen
ya outta date indeed
ya oughtta wait, not lead
cuz ya another piece of bait dangling on Satan's string
dont let the chaos sink into ya data
leave the base beneath n escape the scene
to raise ya beam to major cream...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby Ivy » Mar 6th, '06, 02:13

I really like the message in this one, because a lot of people can relate to hating and shit...nice work on this piece... :flower:
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Shibby4evbitch » Mar 7th, '06, 16:27

koooo homie kuladas
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