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[Enimee]

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CHECK IT YO, im sick with this rap shit,
fuck it, im the shit with this rap shit,
your outdated, never lasted, thats past tense,
faggets, haterz get laughed at and passed trash,
like clean up ho, i aint talkin bout ur act,
but wait, lemme get past that,
i rap plaques, gold and platinum,
you rap wack, old inventions, im oh so insentive,
got ur favorite bitch on my dick, thats sooo tremendous,
and no this isnt, another wanna be marshall rappin silly bars so hard yet impartial,
im more star then your toadstool, and i wont stop till the beefs produced,
we so new, your old news, like phone booths,

[Ka0t1c]

i didn't like the beginning, but in the middle it started going to the end, i like the cockiness you put into the piece but there just wsasnt enough material to help back up the vocab. overall, good effort

[Enimee]

preciate the feed man, yeah i didnt really put alot of time in this, like, 10 15 mins tops for some quick shit nothin spectacular