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Postby DOPE » Mar 26th, '06, 12:49

real hot shit mayn,,,, i wud be hot if u record it
"It's amazing that the amount of news that happens in the world every day always just exactly fits the newspaper."

My basic disk will make you take a razor to your wrist
Make you satanistic
Make you take the pistol to your face
N place the clip N cock it back
N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches


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Postby AspirinE » Mar 26th, '06, 14:55

Nice yo. :8)

looking forward to ya shit dawg.
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Postby Tomega » Mar 26th, '06, 17:18

AspirinE wrote:Catch a man a fish, and you can sell it to him. Teach a man to fish, and you ruin a wonderful business opportunity. - Karl Marx


that's sounds like capitalism
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Mar 26th, '06, 17:43

nice lyrics
looking foward to hearing your tape
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Postby 4D » Mar 27th, '06, 11:11

memyselforwho wrote:somtin im workin on, whatch think?


i get mocked for pervasive language, and breakin explicit hits,
and sayin il never quit, and i wont ever take shit,
i wont degrade myself like a man who eats clits,
id rather take sam-atro-pin, and grow me some tits,
i dont need paper to rip it to bits, il kick it for kicks,
leave your body lookin like a bowl of them grits,
its like an grown man sleepin with a teddbear still,
im so ill, gimme cilin 12 shots i wont feel,
but the killin cannot on this sprea every stop,
that i hit cause a knot in societys jot,
so i write to comprend these comprehensive offenses,
if i have all your backs and swords out to deffend this,
we might be able to fight and create a resentment,
repel the co issues lets deal with the messes,
but then agin its my wish to die, when i pray to the sky,
every night no not why, but god doesnt answer,
cansouris lanterns lit and surrounding my every command sir,
but all in all give or take the persona is this,
take maybe and myself a colaberate em and stich


You`re just gettin better with every rhyme man, great shit!!
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Postby LDPR » Mar 27th, '06, 11:28

memyselforwho nice shit man .. \\//
..Jesus Christ, if your that much of a gangster, put the mic down
You should be out killin motherfuckers right now
Kill a motherfucker dead, kill'em dead bitch ......Shady4life
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