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Postby hot_dogg » Mar 28th, '06, 03:09

its beautiful.. somewhat, good work there buddy

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Would you capture it, or just let it slip?
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Postby 4D » Mar 31st, '06, 22:57

Where`s the rhyme, what happened? :unsure:
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Postby 4D » Mar 31st, '06, 23:07

Cool, nice rhyme man!!

Love that start, dunno why just the words (I`m sad, I wallow deeply) just roll off the tongue.

Nice worplay in there too man, this line :
i kick or a bliss, a kiss is a blitz,


Good work!! :smoking:
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