Uncommon Valor

[WakeUpShow]

Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Za36X7lYRFg

World War I, I just killed 40 Krauts in a row
Bullets whizzing overhead, and I'm crouched in the snow
I see my life flashing right in front of my eyes
I feel like a failure, but I wanted to try
the sun in my eyes, until explosions block it out
I'm bound to die if I don't make a plan or chalk it out
Tanks blast, soldiers wail, my heart racing and my faith dies
I'd Think that I'm thrown in hell, start pacing, and my face cries
Shell Shock hits, now the battlefield is spinning rapidly
In 10 minutes I've seen damn near a 100 casualties
I made my way to the trenches and downed a shot of whiskey
I thought I was safe until I found a shot had hit me
I found my rosary in my pocket, held it close and closed my eyes
I knew this was it because the pain had made me hope to die
A loud explosion made me sit up and scream
Cold sweats and night terrors, but it was only a dream


http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=107969

[WakeUpShow]

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[WakeUpShow]

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[Sam.]

nice multies here bra,simple but good.

the sun in my eyes, until explosions block it out
I'm bound to die if I don't make a plan or chalk it out
Tanks blast, soldiers wail, my heart racing and my faith dies
I'd Think that I'm thrown in hell, start pacing, and my face cries

nice story thar but it felt a little rushed towards the end,like you wanted to finish it off quickly or something,but that's ayt .
good drop brah i liked it .

[SlimShadyX313X]

Nice lyrics, their simple but good, also liked the multies.

[WakeUpShow]

thanks guys but their not simple.

World War I, I just killed 40 Krauts in a row
Bullets whizzing overhead, and I'm crouched in the snow
I see my life flashing right in front of my eyes
I feel like a failure, but I wanted to try
the sun in my eyes, until explosions block it out
I'm bound to die if I don't make a plan or chalk it out
Tanks blast, soldiers wail, my heart racing and my faith dies
I'd Think that I'm thrown in hell, start pacing, and my face cries
Shell Shock hits, now the battlefield is spinning rapidly
In 10 minutes I've seen damn near a 100 casualties
I made my way to the trenches and downed a shot of whiskey
I thought I was safe until I found a shot had hit me
I found my rosary in my pocket, held it close and closed my eyes
I knew this was it because the pain had made me hope to die
A loud explosion made me sit up and scream
Cold sweats and night terrors, but it was only a dream

[Master Chief]

Syllables don't line up...

[WakeUpShow]

Syllables don't line up...

in the midst of flowing to it, you dont notice one or two syllables off.

[WakeUpShow]

i only counted one syllable off

[classthe_king]

Don't listen to him, he doesn't know anything about rap.

The syllables don't have to match, just make sure that it flows

[Master Chief]

Don't listen to him, he doesn't know anything about rap.

The syllables don't have to match, just make sure that it flows

Your raps = suck = you don't know much about rap.

Lol @ u. Peace out

[WakeUpShow]

Don't listen to him, he doesn't know anything about rap.

The syllables don't have to match, just make sure that it flows

alright thanks, and what did you think of the piece?

[WakeUpShow]

bump..

[WakeUpShow]

god damn. bump

[Ka0t1c]

good short piece, some part stuck out a lot which made it presentable, overall quality : 8

btw i enjoy the war themes