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My Mother and Life Together

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My Mother and Life Together

Postby Ivy » Apr 26th, '06, 02:05

[color=red]I wrote this last year in January to my mother, she didn
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Ivy » Apr 26th, '06, 02:11

That means a lot Killa. My parents are divorced and my dad says, and I quote, "I wish she would just drop off the face of the Earth." Sometimes, when I think about what she put me through, I agree. But then I sit back and think, how much of this had to do with the tumor, if any?
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Ivy » Apr 26th, '06, 02:14

I wasn't really concerned with the poem syllables and pattern and stuff when I wrote it to her, I just wanted her to read, grasp, and hopefully get something out of what I was saying, you know?
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Ivy » Apr 26th, '06, 02:17

Thank you everybody, all these comments so soon, I was expecting this to get that much "attention" I guess you can call it. This really means a lot guys. Thanks again :flower:
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Ivy » Apr 26th, '06, 03:22

Sarah wrote::'( awww that was so sad. I'm really sorry to hear that you had to go through this Taylor, it must be horrible. And you read that to her over the phone? Damn that musta been hard :( . I really feel ya Taylor



On the other hand, about the poem itself, very well done. It had so much meaning in it, was sad :'( but was good :flower:


Yeah, I read it to her over the phone, I still remember her words, "I can't talk now, I have to go, bye". She hung up crying, about 10 seconds later, she called back crying into the phone, just to make me cry, a guilt trip, and my dad took over and yelled at her for doing it when I was showing her reality. And thanks for the comment on the poem itself, it means a lot. :flower:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Apr 26th, '06, 03:28

i'm sorry about your mom taylor :'( i can't say that i can relate to you cause i don't know anyone that's alcoholic but i know how it's like to lose a loved one :'(
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Postby Ivy » Apr 26th, '06, 03:29

MuNxMuN wrote:i'm sorry about your mom taylor :'( i can't say that i can relate to you cause i don't know anyone that's alcoholic but i know how it's like to lose a loved one :'(


I've never had anyone I know die, *knocks on wood*. So I can't relate to that, so we're even I guess :p :flower:
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