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Cared To Deeply

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Cared To Deeply

Postby Ivy » Apr 27th, '06, 00:53

I wrote this last year, 2005, in February, so a little more than a year ago.


Her love for him could've changed
Her love for him should've changed
He love for him would've changed
But she still cared of him to deeply

He was on drugs always getting high
Having deceptive identities, living a lie
But she'd remain with him til' she died

He's the light that brightens her nights
She longs for the day when she can hold him tight
She won't deceist crying til' she sees him in sight

He's the antidote that cures her illness
He someimes manipulates and let her down, but she love him never~the~less
Without each other, they're surrounded by complete darkness

He's in the climax of his life and she desperately wants to be part of it
He sees her potential and loves her quite a bit
But in his adventorous lifestyle, he doesn't see where she fits

It doesn't matter though, all the energy he put forth goes to her
Through all the emotional despair they're together and endure
Any problem she has, he has the remedey of the cure
He slept around with others, but remained attached to that gurl

She only knew him an hour but couldn't hide how she felt
His touch sends shivers down her spine, and he makes her heart melt

Her love for him could've changed
Her love for him should've changed
He love for him would've changed
But she still cared of him to deeply
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Postby Ivy » Apr 27th, '06, 01:03

I'm on a roll, I feel like going to Vegas tonight :p
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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