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4 2 girls

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4 2 girls

Postby Darjan333 » Aug 24th, '05, 00:42

They are not here but i must do this song (only "why..." knows them)...

Hey,M and I,would you try to not be so high,in the sky?
You Two bitches are left outside alone-with no friends
esspecially this fact-you havent got any more mens,
Did you ever asking yourself-Why?
Well i will tell you why....-cuz you were hit the bulls eye
or shuld I say-bulls ass?
cuz you stink like dead man under grass,
and you act like you are in first class!
It is so sad to be so stupid to write song about that-
one bitch is short,and the other one is fat
one is looking like a bat,and the other one is brat!
Man,i would like to hit them with a baseball bat...
I quarantee you would hit them too...
They can say they hate me,but that is something i alredy knew
first one could just eat and eat-like winnie the pooh
She dont even know what is meaning of word-shampoo
She has so big ass so she can put there-"I am so fat"-Tattoo
I think she is not bat- she more looks like a kangaroo!!
I would like to hit her-i bet you would like that, too!
And the other one is not using soap
i could bet she is a dope
I would like to hang her on nice little rope
Yeah,i could only hope
They really pissed me,dude
They are so much screwed!
They only know about stink and food!
I know song is not really good,
but for they,i wouldnt do better-even if i could!!
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Wow

Postby Vettori » Aug 24th, '05, 00:58

Now i honestly hate to be mean, But thats the most obstructing obscene thing that ive ever seen, Like I mean, what were yu thinkin, Ill give ya the credit for time, srry for the asshol compliment bro, but, it's true , and yu wanted opinion

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Postby Darjan333 » Aug 24th, '05, 01:02

ok,everyone could have opinion...
But honestly,they are stupid,and i am mean...
it is good combination for me
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Re: 4 2 girls

Postby 4D » Aug 24th, '05, 11:44

DARJAN333 wrote:They are not here but i must do this song (only "why..." knows them)...

Hey,M and I,would you try to not be so high,in the sky?
You Two bitches are left outside alone-with no friends
esspecially this fact-you havent got any more mens,
Did you ever asking yourself-Why?
Well i will tell you why....-cuz you were hit the bulls eye
or shuld I say-bulls ass?
cuz you stink like dead man under grass,
and you act like you are in first class!
It is so sad to be so stupid to write song about that-
one bitch is short,and the other one is fat
one is looking like a bat,and the other one is brat!
Man,i would like to hit them with a baseball bat...
I quarantee you would hit them too...
They can say they hate me,but that is something i alredy knew
first one could just eat and eat-like winnie the pooh
She dont even know what is meaning of word-shampoo
She has so big ass so she can put there-"I am so fat"-Tattoo
I think she is not bat- she more looks like a kangaroo!!
I would like to hit her-i bet you would like that, too!
And the other one is not using soap
i could bet she is a dope
I would like to hang her on nice little rope
Yeah,i could only hope
They really pissed me,dude
They are so much screwed!
They only know about stink and food!
I know song is not really good,
but for they,i wouldnt do better-even if i could!!


Pains me to say it, but i thought that was hilrious.
Well done Darjan, that was very good, i love sick rhymes, even if they are based on real people :twisted:
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Postby Darjan333 » Aug 24th, '05, 11:46

thanks man,I apreciate that!
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Postby X VDoG X » Sep 3rd, '05, 06:33

dat was sum ight shit my dude, keep postin up ur shit
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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 3rd, '05, 18:51

i vote 4, propz kepp it
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