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V-Dog New Shiznit Part II (2) CHECK DIS OUT!!!!

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V-Dog New Shiznit Part II (2) CHECK DIS OUT!!!!

Postby X VDoG X » Sep 3rd, '05, 06:31

I leave SCARS-SKIN-FREE as you *punch with soft blows* like u *SPARRIN-BREEZE*, I'll bash ya *p-an-o keys* as I *cap-shin* ya *flowz by HARMIN-KNEES*
-My fire kicks will SCORCH-YA-MIND n leave ya *hangin off the post* like *war FORFEIT-SIGNS*,I'll ricochet ya *pupils off keys* so you could finally be *ORGAN-EYES'd*
-In the end its a DRAMATIC-SCORE, cuz imma slit ya throat leavin blood a DAMN-DRASTIC-POUR, son even ya *hardest is weak* like *boners on the FANTASTIC-FOUR*
-watch ME-BEAT-THIS-DUMBFUCK cuz ya only *packin the deep shit* when ya PENIS-IS-BUM-RUSHED,your *fire isnt seen* like *using Lu-Kang when ya T.V-IS-UNPLUGGED*

-*Dawg* my punches come inTENSE-WIT-HOOKS *foldin up ya cardigan* like i *BENT-YA-HOOD*, son, your Crew's not Ill cuz thats how *dons hair* is seriously *MEANT-TO-LOOK*
-I'm fabulous cuttin up statistics with big guns that flat line yo OTHER-IMAGE,V-Dog haz been sent to these fags where he can play god sarcastically to his lil BROTHERS-WISHES
-Watch me FIND-THIS-BITCH-QUICK and form my *saliva to knuckles* and use *punch LINES-WITH-FIST-SPITS* Yo, Coderedd, Only a Desperate man would ever wanna be TIED-WITH-BRIT-BRIT
-Mass hits that WRECK-N-TORE ya brain so ya need ya fuckin NECK-RESTORED,CHECK-THE-SCORE, I indented ya *HEAD-THROUGH-BOARDS* leavin ya just like ya *name...SENT-THROUGH-FLOORS*
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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 3rd, '05, 18:49

10, again
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Postby Vettori » Sep 4th, '05, 00:03

WOW nice shit "my dude" lolz
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10 for that one

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