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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 6th, '11, 23:32

Alright, so first off, nice beat. It flowed very well with it to me. Secondly, the rhyming's pretty decent here, that's good. Lots of shots taken here, my goodness is it getting crazy here. Good job. :y:
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby Sam. » Oct 6th, '11, 23:32

Hey ! Don't diss those who give feed man. :tounge2:
This was a not the Reply that i was expecting from you ,kinda weak but the punches were Innovative.Spyder went in on you from all directions man . :coffee:

Could have taken time to write even better shit tbh .
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby Atone » Oct 6th, '11, 23:36

El oh fucking El

ok man, good job, this is about to get fun

you got me good in this, i'll get ya back tho,

i rate this 8/10

minus 2 since it's clearly a weak diss to me
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby Spyder » Oct 7th, '11, 00:31

cute

u need to up ur punch game, saying things like u cant bite cause id shatter ur teeth, so played

flow was easy yes cause lets face it, basic

you concentrate to hard on multies, gotta up ur vocab

in all not to too bad
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby VenomBlackViper » Oct 7th, '11, 01:33

I don't even...... :laughing:

So let me get this straight, after I clip your fairy wings, snap your candy cane, pixie stick bones and rip out your gummy worm intestines, leaving you too shook to respond in the thread, you decide to write a diss track towards me? :laughing:

And yet, you name drop me only twice, don't use a single personal & focus way too much on your little forced Hopsin/Tech N9ne multi's. This isn't a tourney princess, you don't have to hold back, if you're writing a freebase diss track try actually being aggressive in it instead of just stating that you're being aggressive like you did here. I mean c'mon you call yourself a demon and me a faggot and a candy ass? Are you fucking serious? That could not be farther from role reversal, I think I get it now though, you're not angry at me, you're just a disgruntled VBV fan who banned me because I wouldn't PM you an autograph. It's okay pal, mdemaz's fan club is still open.
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby Sam. » Oct 7th, '11, 11:35

It was a response to Spyder's diss . :unsure:
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby mdemaz » Oct 7th, '11, 17:09

What's this about my fan club?
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby VenomBlackViper » Oct 8th, '11, 12:08

You name dropped me twice using the word "Venom", the person who showed it to me could obviously see it was partly about me. Atleast fucking admit it instead of being a little shook bitch, I mean holy shit it's okay to fire shots back at me, or are you only comfortable with subtle name drops & pressing the ban button you little cotton candy cunt?
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Re: Geno - Bang Bang

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 8th, '11, 18:53

You guys need to just take this to the battle section tbh.

As for the verse, it was prety good. You're multies are always on point, flow was solid, and shots were fired. I like this diss better than the other one you put out, by the way.

If you could, mind returning the feed?
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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