Ego - Listen To The Music

[Mr.DGAF]

I think Ego's work gets taken for granted because you guys work with each other so much. But it's becoming quite clear just how good of a duo you guys really are. The way you continue the rhyme schemes each other sets up, and maintain the same topic in the same manner is something that develops only through time. And that is impressive. Now onto the individual verses:

Geno- Shit dude, these multies are ridiculous. They made this piece flow like a charm, but I think I prefer the first verse better. Something about it man, the flow and the multies absolutely make it bananas. In the second verse, I know the structure looked off a bit, but I interpreted it as you were taking a breath before the line continued, like the ... you had in there. So that, though it looks weird, wasn't a problem for me.

Alieus- Almost the same as Geno's feed dude. The multies in your verse are amazing, they make the verse so easy to flow to. Some of the multies were harder to catch because you use the beginning and end of some words to help the multie, which would be easier to detect in audio. But still man, your verse is quite impressive. And the hook was awesome, it kind of had that Fight Music feel to it.

All in all, another solid piece for you guys. I'd love to hear your chemistry together on a song in audio, but I don't really know the situation for either of you on mics and such.

[ChristinaE12]

I skimmed this and its damn good.

I'll properly feed this soon though when I can actually read it right when I'm in the right mind set.

[autotooner]

I pretty much agree with what Mr.DGAF said, excellent work on this piece.

I do want to go out on a limb and comment on the hook, IDK, I seem to like it the most. Don't get me wrong the verses are dope as hell, you both killed them... I guess its because hooks are something I have rarely attempted, and seems like a rarity in this section (from what I've seen anyway) But the hook seems to tie all three verses together and really make this song "complete.

Geno: The first verse is crazy with multi's, and I really like the Rubiks Cube line. I do have one question though, in the second verse,

Or do I need to spit it so quick that you belittle...
The scribbles that I'm pennin' just to skip to diggin' up a riddle?
I don't even wanna fit in, but you're making me look average,
I don't wanna be pushed back but hating on me's just so classless.
So...that's all that needs to be said

I picture the part that's bolded being spit insanely fast. Correct me if I'm wrong, that's just how I took it.

Alieus: I like how you continued Geno's rhyme scheme into your first couple bars. Your multi's flowed really well
In the second bar, I take it that you intend sleepin' to be pronounced "sleep-un" , IMO text verses sometimes don't capture what the writer had in mind because accents, breaths, and whatnot...

Either way, great job guys, Looks like both of you made solid verses, and props to whoever wrote the hook as well.