I need time

[Words]

It seems like I haven't had any time to write recently, seems like it's been forever since I put out a piece. So this is something I wrote during class today.
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I’m not dead, I’ve just been kind of busy,
Finding no time for, writing rhymes lately.
If you’re thinking I’ve stopped , you must be crazy
That or you probably assumed, I’ve gotten lazy.
I gotta get back to business, doing it daily
I’ll keep going, just as long as I don’t fail me.
Until all my nay-sayers turn and about-face me.
I’ve gone to long without a single trace of me.
Time for a streak of crazy, or at least Casey.
It feels like an eternity, since I wrote anything
Be’n silent in this written stillness is fucking maddening.
How can I stay sharp, with no time to write or relaxing?
These facts seem jumbled or mixed, so it’s time to fix
Shit so I can finally come back from this trip, and write a bit.
I used to write everyday, at least a verse or two anyway
But now that present is fading to past too fast, seeing shades of gray
In my way is my dismay, not writer’s block it’s something I haven’t faced.
I have no time to rhyme and I got a lot of shit on the mind.
So what I need to do now is mine time find.
I need time….

[Sam.]

Where the fuck where you man? Oh Wait....

That's some dope story telling bro.It feels like you're telling us something in a normal way, yet maintaining proper Rhyme's and the Multis too.The flow was really good man, keep the rhythm going.

But I think that you overdid this and some how could't get your point across because there's a repetition of the whole concept that you used in this verse.See to this man.

Keep slayin 'em.