Just Spitting

[Wreck]

Link of Feed: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=134147&p=1813014#p1813014

Just touching up on my multis & punches. No real topic to this, just spitting, although I tried to incorporate people needing to strive in life in there.


Storming beaches in Normandy, don't wanna get ahead of myself- put my feet before me
Normalcy is boring to me, have a personality, but also show maturity
I've traveled across foreign seas, but Jersey has my heart like Mike Sorrenti(no)
Respect authority, never neglect chores & cheese; I gotta get it, before it runs out like a warranty
See me shining like the brightest-star, I got the nicest-bars, fighting-odds, gotta fight-this-hard
I'm like a Viking; Favre, I'm hiking-to-bars, gotta tighten, let's start- I gotta charge-the-hard(ships)
Mics-laced, with nice-flakes, of rice-cakes, I'm going off-topic with this line, for Christ's sake
Faced with fear, like Ali I might shake, never right-mistakes, I'm ass backwards like a right mistake
Or a beautiful nightmare, I write here to locate & sight, navigate & elevate my game like a highchair
Last 2 bars don't end right, like I'm off-the road, shit, I'm often-told, to soften-the-blow
76ers fan, I attack, like those Boston-foes, flossin dough, while crossing-hoes
Never break or crumble, never turn fake or fumble, gotta take a break, when trouble
arrises like the sun, shade is in sight, so is the finish line, no-singing-time, now my pen-is-subtle

[Sam.]

Where the fuck do you keep on disappearing to man?

Well it seems you haven't changed your style one bit, ha ha. I see a sea of Multis that do tell a story but in a very complicated way. Feels like Crooked I's verse to me with the quick rhyming, in fact the only way that I could flow to this was with his style, otherwise it's difficult.

Try and structure your shit properly with smaller bars and apt amount of Multis. It took me a lot of time to finish a Bar, and if by chance you're gonna record this, imagine how off-beat you sound. Over doing anything is bad.

The punches were okay, nothing that great(Decent).

Keep slayin 'em.
PS: We've have a sad section.

[Wreck]

Where the fuck do you keep on disappearing to man?

Well it seems you haven't changed your style one bit, ha ha. I see a sea of Multis that do tell a story but in a very complicated way. Feels like Crooked I's verse to me with the quick rhyming, in fact the only way that I could flow to this was with his style, otherwise it's difficult.

Try and structure your shit properly with smaller bars and apt amount of Multis. It took me a lot of time to finish a Bar, and if by chance you're gonna record this, imagine how off-beat you sound. Over doing anything is bad.

The punches were okay, nothing that great(Decent).

Keep slayin 'em.
PS: We've have a sad section.

Yeah it was a fast flow, I crafted it that way. And thanks for the feed man, appreciate it. Yeah I know, I'm working on filing down my bars cause they're too long sometimes lol.

Yeah I agree about that, & Lol I've been posting like once/twice a day, but I haven't been in this sub-forum in awhile. I'll spit some more shit soon.