No More Nightmares

[Spyder]

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=133856 LOF
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=134192 audio link

new topic form horrorcore/punches and did audio, feed that too if you would

Lately I really, been tryin to swallow my pride
But the harder I try I find I become a martyr so I,
Give up, lifes tough but im sick and this sucks
Im done n’ I know to toughen my upper lip up.
This isnt what, I thought it would be
But life is hard and I think im startin to see
When I write these bars why the harpin on me
But dropped the mic and Im gone and I leave,
Just keep walkin like someone is followin me
Brush the dirt off wipe the snot on my sleeve.
My pen in the ink just sorrows the sheets
I dream for better but yet tomorrow is bleak,
I reach for higher but I, fall on my knees
Curl up in a ball and cant stop when it bleeds.
I hate how they treat me im not a disease
When my thoughts are eased is when I nod off to sleep.

I lay down on the pillow but stayin awake
I take these pills but, they only greaten the pain
I made some mistakes and I guess that it shows
Ill never be rested, im being tested I know,
Ive had friends just blow off with gestures so cold
But the lesson im told, don’t let em step on ya toes.
No more nightmares and cold sweat when I wake
Im over that, it is not destined as fate.
Im bendin in ways, to contort to my friends
Wonderin when it is this torture will end,
Cant afford to amend past, look after myself
Crazy addict my daily habits bad for my health,
I never begged nor did I ask for no help
Infact im debating puttin this track on the shelf.
My minds starts to break, insanity’s loomin
Sleeps the cousin of death, I want a family reunion.

Dreamin of bein without the apnea mask
And not wake up breathless and actually gasp
In all actuality my reality’s bad
Enough so, sleeps become a hazardous task.
I gotta quit it and stop with the brilliance
Thankfully I topped the art of resilience.
Its now become me and part what I live with
You gettin deep to the heart of my feelins.
Thinkin about it, so badly I shake
Til I panic and my mentality breaks,
So much its like theyre tryin to battle me, great
Layin in bed then, I gradually fade.
If you ask me today, if im livin my dreams
I would reply, yes that is what it seems,
No more no more nightmares in my mind
I guess everything ends and gone in some time.

[Sam.]

Wonderful.

This maybe the 1st time that I've read something so natural and non-complex thing from you. The approach towards this seemed professional, mainly because you wrote this to a beat.Not only that the content was apt, it suits the audiences who would hear the Audio version of this.You can't just say complicated shit like in text pieces, the listeners might not digest what you trying to say.Maybe that's why you toned down on the lyrical front and added some story type elements to this, which is commendable. You didn't tone down that low lyrically because there's lot of punches that added to the dope-ness. The added story telling element was great and actually held my attention more, each verse had it's part to say and was conveyed with a deep mind state.

The Multis were just off the roof like a G6 . I saw continuation of thought in parts of the verses that you did, helped the flow a lot and was executed wonderfully and with skill.

Lately I really, been tryin to swallow my pride
But the harder I try I find I become a martyr so I,
Give up, lifes tough but im sick and this sucks
Im done n’ I know to toughen my upper lip up.

I think you should this whole EP that you wrote.

[Spyder]

thanks for the feed bro

what was the last line?
i think u left out a word and i cant understand it ahah

[Sam.]

I said you should record your whole EP, after a lot of practice of course.

[Wreck]

This is fucking amazing Spyder, much props. It had meaning, real meaning, and grit to it, and it made you think about pain in life. Not only that but your bars were tight. Multis were very good, and the 3 verses were very well crafted. 5/5 flow.

Keep grinding bro, I look forward to reading/hearing more of your shit .

[Spyder]

thanks man

[Wreck]

thanks man

. We gotta collab, musically, & on the CW section on here. Hmu if you're down.

[Spyder]

if u wanna do audio i can provide a verse,
my beat selection is really picking so if u pick it thats good
and my hook mixing isnt great so if we get pre-set hook
or u do one that works too

[Wreck]

if u wanna do audio i can provide a verse,
my beat selection is really picking so if u pick it thats good
and my hook mixing isnt great so if we get pre-set hook
or u do one that works too

alright we'll work it out. what about a collab on here too?

[Spyder]

really gonna concentrate on my audio, i think any thing i drop here
will be lyrics to a recorded piece

and @ Sam, i think the lyrics and my intended flow
are too advance for my mouth at this point haha

[Sam.]

If you could use some of them, do it.The verses are too dope to be let alone as only Text.

[Spyder]

ill try soon enough
might reword em to new beats, i just cant seem to find beats for shit

[Wreck]

really gonna concentrate on my audio, i think any thing i drop here
will be lyrics to a recorded piece

and @ Sam, i think the lyrics and my intended flow
are too advance for my mouth at this point haha

Alright bro .

I need a collabing partner for a collab in CW. Anyone that really spits interested? Hmu if so.