Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

[Eedee]

^ Geno, I hate to be an eavesdropping Ethan, but:

Use cycloptic vision to hold undivided attention

Just a punchline I picked out. I think it's actually pretty clever. Cyclops = one eye. Attention using one eye instead of two to 'divide' the attention. Idk. I thought it was pretty good.

I'ma leave the conversation back to you two now.

[Sam.]

I'm not hating. Point out some punchlines.

Not hating?
I know that you’re not hater, but you didn’t say anything that proves otherwise. You didn’t even mention where I need to improve, nothing. Okay, you said that the rhyming was not that good, but when I said that use the UK accent to bend the words, you ever refused to take it in. Damn! You refused to co-operate, I mean that’s the whole key with this shit bruh. Those who used the accent enjoyed the work. I know you listen to Eminem and he’s known to bend words…lol.

Word, but 1 good one out of a punchline focused piece, which is pretty damn long (32 bars) is...eh..

What word? I wrote the verse of 34 Bars and I know the punch lines that I did. Usually I don’t like my punch lines but I’m satisfied with this. There are 16 Punches altogether and not the one that our friend pointed out is dope and not..Eh..

C’mon you’re one of those dude’s who does punches that will blow your mind. You calling my punches wack is not acceptable man, I know that was your opinion but w/e dude.

I can’t go ahead and explain each of those punches that I did, because it’s kinda pointless because you’re gonna stereotype that too. I’m arguing with you in friendly manner and never would mock you because you’re a better Rhymer than me, but if you’re the only one who doesn’t like the punches then I’m bound to disagree man.

C’mon son.

[Spyder]

i think he was saying word...

like yes... its a slang term bra

[Sam.]

I know.I was talking about the things that he said after that. lol

[Sam.]

Peace bro.

I loved all my Punchlines that I did and I can say that they were dope.

[Spyder]

alright as big bad CW mod i deem this battle over

people can hold their opinions broskies

everyones opinion is valued

now Sam, what next

[Sam.]

alright as big bad CW mod i deem this battle over

people can hold their opinions broskies

I was defending myself over something I felt wrong, now it's all good(I guess).

everyones opinion is valued

now Sam, what next

Nothing.

[Sam.]

Final Bump.

[Wreck]

Sam

1st verse- Deep, dope verse. Really in depth mostly.

Spyder's verse- Nice multies. I really liked this verse as well, verses were totally different in my opinion.
And I loved this line

My identical twin killed himself knowing he’d never match me.

lol good shit guys, keep grinding. check out my newest piece as well please. hopefully i can collab with both of you if you're each interested.

[Sam.]

Word man.