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Re: Zabe - Forgive Me (feat. Geno)

Postby SG. » Dec 4th, '11, 21:20

Little bump. Jus a lil' one.
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Re: Zabe - Forgive Me (feat. Geno)

Postby Wreck » Dec 5th, '11, 07:36

Nice multies Zabe, nice concept, Geno's verse was too simple, not enough to it imo. First two lines didn't even rhyme either.

But I liked the piece overall.
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Re: Zabe - Forgive Me (feat. Geno)

Postby Wreck » Dec 5th, '11, 08:40

Geno wrote:
Wreck wrote:Nice multies Zabe, nice concept, Geno's verse was too simple, not enough to it imo. First two lines didn't even rhyme either.

But I liked the piece overall.

LOL didn't even rhyme.


They didn't.
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Re: Zabe - Forgive Me (feat. Geno)

Postby Sam. » Dec 5th, '11, 19:27

Wreck wrote:
Geno wrote:
Wreck wrote:Nice multies Zabe, nice concept, Geno's verse was too simple, not enough to it imo. First two lines didn't even rhyme either.

But I liked the piece overall.

LOL didn't even rhyme.


They didn't.

LOL dude.
widow/deliver(delivour) ~ It did Rhyme to me this way. Heard of bending words? Accents?
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Re: Zabe - Forgive Me (feat. Geno)

Postby Sam. » Dec 5th, '11, 19:41

It's easy to catch that even without those, the Lines in question needs a minute effort to make it Rhyme. The Multi was good overall, just because of the a single word from the whole Multi didn't Rhyme easily for you, then it means it doesn't Rhyme completely? :laughing: This is funny doe.
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Re: Zabe - Forgive Me (feat. Geno)

Postby SG. » Dec 5th, '11, 19:53

(there/her)Sorry, what was that?
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Re: Zabe - Forgive Me (feat. Geno)

Postby Sam. » Dec 5th, '11, 20:01

Zabe wrote:(there/her)Sorry, what was that?

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