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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Sam. » Dec 5th, '11, 20:17

Geno pretty much sums up my thoughts on this.The Multis that he pointed out are just few examples, there are more of them. There are Multis but they are a stretch as far as I tried to do justice with them. Even with the accent it's hard, I know a lot of accent's because I've talked to people with different kind of accents. It's not your fault, this happens when you're writing and suddenly a dope though comes to your mind and you want to put it in the dopest manner with lot of Multis but don't find words to do it. Content wise you nailed it. Don't worry man, I use the UK Accent a lot and it poses a problem to the feeders.

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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Spyder » Dec 5th, '11, 22:21

actually if u spit this to audio you can make it work easily, geno doesnt do audio so wouldnt know

the extra and will be under spoken and not emphasized so the sentence makes sense itll catch the beat
and if he uses correct intonation itll sounds right
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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Sam. » Dec 5th, '11, 22:25

I know
Spyder wrote:actually if u spit this to audio you can make it work easily, geno doesnt do audio so wouldnt know

the extra and will be under spoken and not emphasized so the sentence makes sense itll catch the beat
and if he uses correct intonation itll sounds right

I was thinking the same if you ask me, even then it's hard at places. I do the same at times but..this case is a little different.
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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Spyder » Dec 6th, '11, 01:41

um i said you dont do audio cause... you dont do audio?

gimme a track youve recorded... oh wait no mic, no looks like you dont do audio

im not saying you wouldnt be good at, im saying u dont.
that is all that is being said here
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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Spyder » Dec 6th, '11, 01:51

im saying if you were familiar enough with it you would realize those lines you pointed out
can sounds good or normal in audio if done right.
it text no, because the reader wont automatically pick up on it

whereas if u HEARD it first, then READ it ud know what he was doing.

ignorance was not conveyed it my posts. just obvious facts
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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Dec 6th, '11, 01:55

I think the thing with bending words is that it should be used very little with writtens. The reader should be able to decipher what rhymes and what doesn't quickly. I read through this once, on my phone so the structure didn't matter as it had shortened the bars to fit my screen, and it seemed to flow pretty nice. But oh well.

But yeah, unless you post it to audio so we have something to work with, then who knows what's bent and what not? Reading lyrics from Relapse, without knowing that it was accented, would make the work far less exciting.

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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Wreck » Dec 6th, '11, 05:55

Spyder wrote:im saying if you were familiar enough with it you would realize those lines you pointed out
can sounds good or normal in audio if done right.
it text no, because the reader wont automatically pick up on it

whereas if u HEARD it first, then READ it ud know what he was doing.

ignorance was not conveyed it my posts. just obvious facts


Thank you, my point exactly.
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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Wreck » Dec 6th, '11, 05:56

Mr.DGAF wrote:I think the thing with bending words is that it should be used very little with writtens. The reader should be able to decipher what rhymes and what doesn't quickly. I read through this once, on my phone so the structure didn't matter as it had shortened the bars to fit my screen, and it seemed to flow pretty nice. But oh well.

But yeah, unless you post it to audio so we have something to work with, then who knows what's bent and what not? Reading lyrics from Relapse, without knowing that it was accented, would make the work far less exciting.

Just my two cents


I respect your opinion, but in my opinion I use bending words no matter where or what. Thanks for the feed though.
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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Wreck » Dec 6th, '11, 05:58

Sam. wrote:Geno pretty much sums up my thoughts on this.The Multis that he pointed out are just few examples, there are more of them. There are Multis but they are a stretch as far as I tried to do justice with them. Even with the accent it's hard, I know a lot of accent's because I've talked to people with different kind of accents. It's not your fault, this happens when you're writing and suddenly a dope though comes to your mind and you want to put it in the dopest manner with lot of Multis but don't find words to do it. Content wise you nailed it. Don't worry man, I use the UK Accent a lot and it poses a problem to the feeders.

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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Sam. » Dec 6th, '11, 19:44

Geno wrote:
Spyder wrote:um i said you dont do audio cause... you dont do audio?

gimme a track youve recorded... oh wait no mic, no looks like you dont do audio

im not saying you wouldnt be good at, im saying u dont.
that is all that is being said here

Yeah but because I don't record doesn't mean I don't perfect my own tracks to sound good IF they were recorded, and doesn't mean I know nothing about audio.

Talk about ignorance.

When you actually do it in the Mic, things change. Indeed you know about laying vocals but that's not what Spyder said, he was talking about the actual experience(I guess).
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Re: I Love Spitting (Multies & Metas)

Postby Spyder » Dec 6th, '11, 20:27

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