Bad Guy

[Wreck]

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I once was in the Illuminati but they threw me out on the porch
Thousands of whores, dousing my pores, & howling of course
I'm a mix of Kid Cudi, & Kid Rock- that's why my monikers Whiz Kid
"Mr. Don't Give A Fuck your ban now has been lifted"
Creative experiments, went from therapist to therapist
Shot their buildings up like Heroin, I'm part Manson like Marilyn
No creative control cause I do it my way from the get go, jeez
I'm not a Saint, let's go Brees, nobody's hands will ever rest on me
Stick to the script dawg, or do as you please
Now there's a new batch of MCs that don't listen to Esco, are you kidding me?
I'm the Lebron of rap, call me the bad guy, I'm fine with that
Poor enough to just eat off of dining scraps, I'll eat a bitch out, then run- call it dine & dash

[Sam.]

Man I really like the things that you bring to the table. The content is really fresh. I liked the flow on this piece but was a little problem until I got the way you placed your Multis. Once again the Multis were hard and it only works when you say it loud. I had to try and flow through this twice to get every Multi that you used. This is by default a Text Piece so such type of Multis would cause a problem to the readers and you might get negative feed.Either post the beat that you used to write this or use simple words in Multis.

The content wont fetch you praises all the time, there are other technicalities that will. I'm not saying that the Multis were hard all over the verse, but there was a mixture of easy and hard one's.Either way Good job man. Keep at it.

Keep slayin 'em. ~ Eminem

[Wreck]

Man I really like the things that you bring to the table. The content is really fresh. I liked the flow on this piece but was a little problem until I got the way you placed your Multis. Once again the Multis were hard and it only works when you say it loud. I had to try and flow through this twice to get every Multi that you used. This is by default a Text Piece so such type of Multis would cause a problem to the readers and you might get negative feed.Either post the beat that you used to write this or use simple words in Multis.

The content wont fetch you praises all the time, there are other technicalities that will. I'm not saying that the Multis were hard all over the verse, but there was a mixture of easy and hard one's.Either way Good job man. Keep at it.

Keep slayin 'em. ~ Eminem

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate the continuous support & feed, & I'll work on what you said.