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Postby Zare » Aug 31st, '05, 00:02

Does anyone here wanna do a song Collabaration?

like both of us sing 1 verse and both take credit for the song ?

if you do just post



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Postby Vettori » Sep 1st, '05, 14:30

I want to, WOW finally someone with an offer,
I will man, sounds good, Are you good with verses?
Aight man, whenevr yu want to, lets do it up,
Give me a topic, like what it will be about,
Random?
Pissed?
Life?
..etc..
Get it lolz


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Postby Zare » Sep 1st, '05, 16:53

Yeah im pretty good with verses , i got about 11 songs done already , gonna make a mixtape when i get a mike :D .

hmm any topic at all , and since you accepted I'll let you decide what topic.

or if you cant like about hmm .. just freestyle or something
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Postby Vettori » Sep 1st, '05, 19:20

Aight, well do, A kinda pissed at life,
Fuckin hate people, This isnt gothic, just a deep on, I have already started it i got a chorus, and a verse, just gimme heads up, and ill post, and yu can finish ?

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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 1st, '05, 19:22

good luck 4 both
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Postby Zare » Sep 1st, '05, 20:21

ok pissed life thats fine , but how about you do half a chorus and i do the other half? and you post your verse then ill finish , just like you said.
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Postby Vettori » Sep 1st, '05, 23:03

HEREs what i had, if you want to, fix it up ok

Spit

(intro)

Fuck life and fuck everyone in it,
Shut the fuck up, and let me live mine,
You don't understand
"Nothing"

(Chorus)

I hate you, and theres nothing you can do,
My life has changed, bitches are threw,
They came to me and did there deeds,
Sucked my dick, and fulfilled my needs,
Now that they out of the way, i can do what i please,
Always about you and never me,
Now, that i'm older i can honestly see,
Bitches just aint the answer,They just can never be
(echoe) never be

(Verse 1)

It takes a simple second for a gun to revolve, and years and years of fuckin pain for life to evolve
Nobody can Take me fuckin serius, Actin all mysterius, makin me delirius, I'm Fuckin furius,
Bitches help add on to the problems,
Parents and assholes, always assumming they can solve them,
So i take out a peace of paper, and a blue inked pen,
Write all the shit down, and get back on track and try to mend,
This whole in my world, thats making me half,
You can all suck my dick, while i laugh, at the staff,
When i say staff, i mean school teachers that preach,
That sit down, whiping there asses, while impairing there speech,
Tryin to teach, Bullshit, teach me what,
The only thing ive learned, is how to spit in bitches faces,
and fuck sluts,
Now tell me what, "Weve made you a real man"
Fuck that shit you faggits, I'm just here to stand.

(Chorus)

I hate you, and theres nothing you can do,
My life has changed, bitches are threw,
They came to me and did there deeds,
Sucked my dick, and fulfilled my needs,
Now that they out of the way, i can do what i please,
Always about you and never me,
Now, that i'm older i can honestly see,
Bitches just aint the answer,They just can never be
(echoe) never be

(Verse 2)


I dunno man you make something of that i guess, Edit it basically

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Postby Sunni » Sep 1st, '05, 23:24

What's your group called?
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Postby Zare » Sep 2nd, '05, 00:36

I decide to name it nothing if it's ok with u , you wrote it with qoutations in the intro and I did in the outro

You can edit mine to , and if this works out we can collab more only if you want to , singing a song myself is just boring.. 2 people at once is obviously better.


(intro)

Fuck life and fuck everyone in it,
Shut the fuck up, and let me live mine,
You don't understand
"Nothing"

(Chorus)

I hate you, and theres nothing you can do,
My life has changed, bitches are threw,
They came to me and did there deeds,
Sucked my dick, and fulfilled my needs,
Now that they out of the way, i can do what i please,
Always about you and never me,
Now, that i'm older i can honestly see,
Bitches just aint the answer,They just can never be
(echoe) never be

(Verse 1)

It takes a simple second for a gun to revolve, and years and years of fuckin pain for life to evolve
Nobody can Take me fuckin serius, Actin all mysterius, makin me delirius, I'm Fuckin furius,
Bitches help add on to the problems,
Parents and assholes, always assumming they can solve them,
So i take out a peace of paper, and a blue inked pen,
Write all the shit down, and get back on track and try to mend,
This whole in my world, thats making me half,
You can all suck my dick, while i laugh, at the staff,
When i say staff, i mean school teachers that preach,
That sit down, whiping there asses, while impairing there speech,
Tryin to teach, Bullshit, teach me what,
The only thing ive learned, is how to spit in bitches faces,
and fuck sluts,
Now tell me what, "Weve made you a real man"
Fuck that shit you faggits, I'm just here to stand.


Yah that was faith99
his shit is much betta then randy clyne



Chorus ( his and my half )

I hate you, and theres nothing you can do,
My life has changed, bitches are threw,
They came to me and did there deeds,
Sucked my dick, and fulfilled my needs,
Just like Faith said " they out his way "
But not mine I still fuck all day,
My life is different but I don't relly on bitches
but once they did some shit and that changed my opinion since i needed stitches...( stitches )

(Verse 2)

Nobody will ever know what kind of pain and jelousy I've been thrue
People say I fuck every day , but they wrong its just hue
They all put me thrue too much ,
I got so serious I took a gun and I shot every character in the brady bunch
I get angry quick
some hoe come by and I say I'm not in the mood to get jumped on my dick..
Bitches they come they go
Thats what I call a hoe
It makes me furious
I tell them all " I'm Fucking SERIOUS!"
If I'm ever famous in the crowd I always half to blend
Some fucking peprazzi attack , I gotta defend!
When I'm serious I'll shoot one in the air and let my rage out
When I fuck you up , you'll go to your moma and pout
Some shit comes when you least expect it
If you try for president..psst , you'll neva get elected
If I'm eva in court
I'll just say fuck the judge laugh and snort..

(chorus)

I hate you, and theres nothing you can do,
My life has changed, bitches are threw,
They came to me and did there deeds,
Sucked my dick, and fulfilled my needs,
Just like Faith said " they out his way "
But not mine I still fuck all day,
My life is different then Faith but I don't relly on bitches
but once they did some shit and that changed my opinion since i needed stitches...( stitches )

(Outro)

This was the shit about life
Its fucked up
Never trust anyone
Nobody or " Nothing"
Last edited by Zare on Sep 2nd, '05, 00:58, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 2nd, '05, 00:54

that's gonna be a tight song once you guys do the audio for it.
do you guys have a beat yet?
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Postby Zare » Sep 2nd, '05, 00:55

Meh I have about 30 - 35 beats , but I dont have a mic yet..
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Postby DragonzEdge » Sep 2nd, '05, 01:45

get a mic, they aint that expensive
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Haha

Postby Vettori » Sep 2nd, '05, 16:42

Nice, that was good, Yea i have a mic, but my comp warps voice too much lmfao,We will eventually get it audio someday lolz,
There wasnt a beet used, I just off the head, with a beet i write much better, but, then if you read it it will come out differantly,
But anyways,, Nice work Zare, (Props) :P
Everyone get ready for the new shit,
Oh and we dun have a name lolz
I think for a name, we should be a lil more creative,
lets give it time
Peace

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Postby Zare » Sep 2nd, '05, 20:33

aight man. thx
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Postby Prodigy10 » Sep 6th, '05, 05:57

i think its cool to rap
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