3rd Verse Still Working!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Hey guys, this is my 3rd drop. I am still getting a grasp on multis but my next drop will definitely be a topical with metaphors and inverses and such. Thanks everyone!

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Im past insane Ill crash ya plane
In galactic Space, Dasch da name
Ill leave you with a plastered face
Cause im mentally deranged
like a zombie, bitch I'll eat your brains
you think your the illest in the game?
drop one line ill drill ya with my rage
still I'm spitting flames at my enemies
Ill spit a free to put you in endless sleep
Just when you thought you finished me
Ill be in your streets with a tenth of weed
On halloween saying trick or treat!
Youll over power me maybe in your dreams
Noone to save you Noone to intervene
you begin to bleed when my knee hits your spleen
Now your girls in the trunk shes shivering
Lights flickering I might hit some weed
Now my knifes entering your pissed off team
My delivery has you withering
thats what you ask when you clash
with a one man infantry!

[Mr.DGAF]

It's definitely good to get these out of the way to get multies down to a level you're comfortable with. However, these typically are just like freestyles and I would like to see you spit on a topic. It's much easier to spit something like this than to figure out how to pack a topical with multies and flow. But I think you can do it man, you show some promise and you can definitely rhyme. Some complexity wouldn't hurt, but you're just starting.

If you ever wanna collab, hit me up dude. I'm open and taking a break from my own stuff for a second.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Thanks for the feed dgaf! Yeah I know what you mean, i have been worki g on about 2 topic verses and they are much harder but I'm going to start focusing more of my time and energy on them. And hopefully they will come out good. I'll definitely hit you up for a collab sometime!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Thanks for the advice TRex, Ill definitely hit both of yall up once I start getting better!! I already started working on some topical ones so Ill be posting them within a week or two, Thanks a lot man!
Also I do plan on recording at some point but only when I get much better!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Yeah man, I know what you mean! I'm not even going to think about it until I have at least 10 quality pieces