Crazy as wait, what?

[Gummybur]

I hit up the doc today, he told me I should act more sentimental, he insists so I pick up this pencil I sentamental thought straight into his fuckin' temple ripped it back out its a god damn rental, claimed he couldn't move from his feet up to his eyes i'm like bitch, shut up and move those thighs, thats nothing more than a fuckin paralyze, oh, did I hit below it? Dont care, i'll rip your dumbass belt off and throw it, oh by the way man, I hope you like milk and butter, i'm throwing you under the ass of a cow and leaving you in utter disbelief of what i can achieve lyrically, im a lyrical black smith, i smith what i will smith, im white but i'll still smith this shit right into hitlers hitlist.

Girls here, gotta go, sorry if this isn't appropriate for the website

[Gummybur]

Meaning give my opinion on someones lyrics and post a link with what I write, and who ever it is sends feedback to what I wrote I'm assuming? Just getting it straight.

[AbramIsaac]

Basically.

You just need to give someone feedback, and then link to your post in your thread.

[Gummybur]

Ohhhhh! Alright that's a great system to! As you as you said Geno, keep the flow going to reduce the amount of kids that bash someone for what they write. Constructive criticism and a few nice opinions for each thing written. I'll get on that when I wake up tomorrow, for now I have to take care of my girlfriend (Lots of stress going on) Thanks for welcoming me they you guys are. Really didn't expect that, I'll be back on tomorrow to do it right, for now have a goodnight!

[Slim Fiasco]

The rhyming looks good, I like it from that aspect. But please post your verses in lines so that it's easier to read them.