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It's no Put You On Game but it should be a nice read. I was playing around with personification again, but this time from a different point of view. The tittle obviously alludes to Nas's song which uses a similar concept.
I was born in the year nineteen thirty
Raised by Germans, my family was dirty
First thing they taught me was to hate Peace
They said he killed my father, the one they sadly miss
I never met him, but read about him in the books
An evil man, breathing blood, had horrifying looks
His best friends were the so-called Central Powers
Also known as the reason for people to buy flowers
My goal is to achieve the same but on a higher level
I’ve been trained to drop bombs and react as a rebel
I’m a deadly force, the source of evil, got no remorse
Helped by the Axis, I’ll make Peace pay like the taxes
It’s the end of the thirties, on the first of September
I will make you remember, how I burst through the door
They’ll know me as the world’s second, call me The War
*Probable plot holes (or whatever) with the dying/birth dates of the father (world war 1) and the son (word war 2) but I hope you don't mind it, lol. Or maybe the mother was pregnant for 12 years instead of 9 months, haha.