Fucking Around (Fiasco Day 6)

[Slim Fiasco]

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It was me, a lesbian and two hot twins, both hoes
I said “which one is sucking it first while I do flows?”
The dyke said “why not all three at the same time?”
One of the twins replied “no way that dick is all mine!”
Her sister got angry and said “fuck me immediately”
“We’ll suck it in the meantime, beating it repeatedly”
I said “the hell with all you just get fucking undressed”
Did it in anger like I was doing arrest, so I made a mess
By elbowing the dyke the same way it’s done by Artest
She was out for the night, and I turned off the damn light
The twins said “Are you alright, you act as if this is a fight?”
I said “Shut up you bitches, stop questioning your master”
“Now I’ll put your pussies in stitches if you don’t cum faster”
They got scared but then I think it turned ‘em on even more
So they entered foreplay mode and did me like never before
My testicles became sore and pink like Nicki Minaj’s haircut
That got me pissed and my hair up and I couldn’t bust a nut
But if they’re giving me blue balls, I’m giving them two holes
So I pulled my shot-gun out and put a bullet in each one’s nose

[Slim Fiasco]

Your rhyming improved a lot tbh, and this story is hella hilarious with full of unexpected shit, the Nicki Minaj line was hilarious and the irony in the last bar is awesome as shit. You improved a lot since the experiment started tbh, great shit man.

Thanks man! The Nicki line was inspired by that Peter Rosenberg video when he was dancing, lol. And yeah, I was trying to be ironical with that last line, I'm glad it worked out. As for the rhyming, I think it's because I'm more focused to it in my language, so it isn't that hard of a transition. The thing is, with English you can tell so much more and play with the content, that I don't want to limit it with specific rhymes.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

AHAHA damn son this was great! aweesome story telling piece! loved all the twists you had in there! great job.

[Slim Fiasco]

AHAHA damn son this was great! aweesome story telling piece! loved all the twists you had in there! great job.

Haha, thanks bro I appreciate that! I'm happy that it made you laugh, I was definitely aiming for that.