Suicide Note (Fiasco Day 4)

by **SG.** » Jun 22nd, '12, 01:03

Beat: Ab-Soul - Track Two
LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146210

You thought you could kill me and that would be the end of it
But I ain't limited by reality, I take glee in bending it
Keep dreaming, fucker, I'm your worst nightmare
You fucked with my girl? Now you'll forget why you liked her
Cuz when I said I had no feelings left, you knew that I was lying
But you had to have her when I never could, now you dying
Right now I'm strangling you while writing your suicide note
But you're struggling against me, fighting to deny to choke
So I put you on a crucifix cuz you said you'd save her from the world
Look at us competing, we're inflicting hurt on the girl
You stole her from me, how could you do something like that?
You did it anyway, didn't think I'd fuckin' bite back
Then YOU killed her? Oh, the horror of humanity!
People like you ruin the good name of insanity
So I finally broke your neck and sapped away your health
Guess I'm going to hell since I was talking to myself

by **Mr.DGAF** » Jun 22nd, '12, 01:15

Oooh. This challenge has resulted in so many twist endings and stuff haha. Yeah, I liked that. Rhyming was good, there was a good amount of emotion in this actually. Not something I expected from any of the pieces today. I really liked the insanity line, that was awesomely dope.

by **ShAdYTiLIDie** » Jun 22nd, '12, 06:00

I read this to a dark beat and it flowed really well man! awesome rhyming through the whole thing, I am liking reading these darker style verses! Keep it up!