Geno - Lucid (Fiasco Day 12)

[Mr.DGAF]

I liked this man, we finally finished this thing. Good way to end it too, nice track. Flowed easily, which isn't really a surprise haha. I've been bumping Hop lately so the first line reminded me of that haha. I also like how you wrapped this piece up in general. Good stuff.

[Atone]

this was pretty damn sick, i like the story in the form of the fiasco days type thing, the rhymes went smoothly,

at first i thought you were dissing everybody but i kept readin on to realize your telling a metaphoreical story and it made sense, pretty dope

[Sam.]

Damn, that's what I call creativity. Keeping in track of the thing going around and penning them in a story is brilliant. I had problems with the opening 4 bars, rhyming was not clicking properly. No problem with the rest, smooth as always.

Edit: I just saw the beat, now rhymes eased up for me, haha.

[Dentist]

Nice job man, really liked the rhymes in this.

[Dentist]

Yeah i write occasionally but mine aint as good as your guys shit!

[dmnelson0351]

I like reading your shit, I'm trying to study your structure and apply it to my own. I have a long ways to go though. It doesn't seem to fit when I'm writing, maybe I'm forcing to much on my own shit. I really liked the story you were telling though. Good shit man.