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CanadaPure - Sinister Sixteen

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 14th, '13, 06:19

This is the last thing for a bit because I realize everything on here has pretty much been me and pain the last couple of days, and I want to take a break. That being said, since I'm just starting out I like as much feed as I can get.

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p6GRPdYU1KM
LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=152667#p2087013

Look in my eyes, aren't they hazy, I don't need a thesis
Or experiment to prove lies like Casey won't cleave a fetus
A heated germephobe beatin' it while tryin' to clean diseases
I mean it, I'll give Edith my meat while trying to sweep her visas
I just want to lay my verse and at worst a dame gets hurt
And if it ain't deserved then you're welcome to blame me first
Travel to the whine cellar in the back of Amy's hearse
The driver swerved and fucked up my game of Angry Birds
After the crash my face was lookin' like Rocky Dennis
So bad in fact I had to get booked in a hockey dentist
So when I'm spittin' this shit see its a sinister sixteen
No criminal instinct I'm like a Minister, pristine
I'm in a love triangle with two girls who wont try anal
When I grab my ankles she never seems to catch my angle
It makes me sad when I think that none of this ever happened
I'm just on my bed jackin' wishin' I had a better napkin
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Re: CanadaPure - Sinister Sixteen

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 14th, '13, 06:28

:worship: That was a hot sixteen my friend. That ending killed me, that was epic. :laughing:
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Re: CanadaPure - Sinister Sixteen

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 14th, '13, 06:30

Thanks Painkiller. The ending is my favorite part to, and sadly very biographical.
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Re: CanadaPure - Sinister Sixteen

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 14th, '13, 06:34

lmao. Yeah man, that was cleverly written.
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Re: CanadaPure - Sinister Sixteen

Postby Eedee » Jan 14th, '13, 08:20

This was pretty good, yo. I like the rhymes, they're a step-up!! Great flow and shit.

Clever ending.
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Re: CanadaPure - Sinister Sixteen

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 14th, '13, 08:58

Eedee wrote:This was pretty good, yo. I like the rhymes, they're a step-up!! Great flow and shit.

Clever ending.


Tbh I thought of the ending while I was on the toilet taking a dump.
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