Poem/Rap I wrote about my father

[EmsPreacher]

This was my first time actually sitting down with a beat trying to write some rhymes so forgive me if I don't meet your standards.


You never said much but I could tell you were in pain
In dedication to your life I'm trying to maintain
But it ain't the same
I know if you were here I'd be smilin again
There's a lotta things youve missed since slitting your wrists
Like watching me exist, get my first kiss
But that's all dismissed, I ain't mad at all
I know you dont wanna hear it but ive had a few close calls
Layin in the hospital, just about dead
Tryin to remember just what you said
You told me to live, you told me to prosper
Well guess what Dad? I'm bout to fucking conquer
And thats the truth, I'm livin for you
I dropped outta school but im goin back soon
Ive had trouble with the law, more times than id like to count
But I sit here in awe, just tryin to amount
To someone you'd be proud of, someone you could back
Goddamn man, grandpa had another heart attack
Ever since that day, when Grandpa passed away
My life's been in array, everyday been gray
But as I sit here now, writing this song
I can see that youve been with me all along
You can bet that one day, when I have children
They gon here about there granddad, he was worth a million


That's all I've got right now. I'll try to take some unnecessary words out later to make it flow better.

[Just Silver]

needs feed/ you need to give feedback first and post the link i know its a gay rule