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V-dog da menace, god damn dis shits sick!!!!!

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V-dog da menace, god damn dis shits sick!!!!!

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 13th, '05, 03:51

its HUMOROUS PLEASE, stop trying to RECRUIT ME AND GEEZ! tell yer DUDES ON THEY'RE KNEES to quit USING THEY'RE TEETH/
with a BOOT TO YOUR SPLEEN, dont talk about guns nigga, cause you still having trouble "SHOOTING THE BREEZE"/
RAW WITH THE FORCE to SLAUGHTER YOUR CORPSE, spittin HARDER OF COURSE/
My SQUAD IS THE SOURCE, and you run with a bunch of "dead beats" like you RECORD IN THE MORGUE!/
FLAWLESS IS LORDS, watch how we "clean house" never DIRSEGARDING OUR CHORES!/
ive peeped your HORRIBLE MUSIC and refuse to PARDON EXCUSES my STARDOMS EXCLUSIVE/
'drop from decent to not mentioned at all' "keep your head up" or ill be HONORED TO DO IT/
Decapitated with both HANDS ON YOUR CHEEK, take your forehead STAMPING CONCRETE/
DAMAGE YOUR TEAM, i HAPPEN TO BE an IMMACULATE BEAST who'll leave you DRASTICALLY BEAT, a portion of your body HACKED FROM YOUR FEET to DAMPEN THE STREET,with the other HALF IN A CREEK/ damn!
Ive SPLIT FACES my SCRIPTS SHAPESHIFT call this KID MATRIX/
who thinks my SPITS AINT SICK? leave your WRISTS STRAIGHT SLIT when i come "off the wall" like CHIPPED PAINT BITCH!/


you better STOP AND YELL PEACE my ROCKETS SPELL BEEF got kids COPPING L'S FREE/
i run with a FLOCK OF HELLS BEASTS, and V-Dog aint got no 'album' out, but still im DROPPING LP/
CLAP TILL YOUR LUNG'S DETACHED...this BASTID AINT COMMING BACK/
and LAUGH CAUSE THIS BROTHERS TRASH, you were never shit, best part about you dripped down the CRACK OF YOUR MOTHERS ASS!/


GOD DAMN!!! HOW DO I DO DIS?!!!
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Postby Hunneh_Buns » Sep 13th, '05, 03:53

Another good rap for V-Dog! =D>
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 13th, '05, 03:54

Hunneh_Buns wrote:Another good rap for V-Dog! =D>



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Re: V-dog da menace, god damn dis shits sick!!!!!

Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 13th, '05, 03:55

V-DogDaMenace wrote:
GOD DAMN!!! HOW DO I DO DIS?!!!


that's a good question. another great verse :D
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