Tragedy

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My ex broke up with me at the beginning of the year, so all last month I've been writing lyrics. Most of them have been very Eminem-esque, using drugs and humor to mask serious content. This is my most recent one, I have a few others that I'll share if this one is received well. This probably has the best content out of them all. Most of the other verses bash sluts lol.

Here comes the series again
You're peering into a mind of jeering discontent
I'm nearing the end I can feel death's sonnet so you can pitch a tent
I'll never stop rapping crap about chicks, I do it for kicks, bitch
I can still feel her head on my shoulder as she had once rest on it
But now only this lead is my anchor and boulders are making me drown
The Golden Gates I am bound and there's no saving me now
Flashback to before I'm on my death bed
Back to a time long before the stress and the tension
Long before having sex became a mission and the only thing I needed was to play
Outside in the rain and when it's hot, go into the shade
How those were the good ole' days, Nintendo days
Before hoes began to mold their games
To set off on expected fellas
Hell, might as well inspect the jail 'cause
They got us on lock-down and there are no bailiffs
So I took a stainless steel glock and made my escape on a space ship
I stay slick and I'll slay hoes like I'm Jason
Chasin' down vodka with whiskey
So don't get me pissed, B, or I might make you look like a sissy
Hit me and you'll fucking regret it, your rhymes got rejected
I say what I want and you better fucking respect it
Scratch you off like a check-list, ask no questions
Fast forward to the present, my presence is a fading
But even as I lay dying, I'm still acting crazy and shady
What's wrong with my brain, gee, I must be insane 'cause I want Death to take me
Fuck it, I've already lost a good girl along with all of the meth I've been saving
Here I am, raising my hands to the sky, fucking waiting to die
I've been hating my life so now I'm saying goodbye
And then, at the end of it all, I snap back to reality
From this tragedy, realize that the only one holding me back...is me

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Link of feed?

Not sure I understand lol.

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Oh shit, I did not read the rules lol. I should have. I assumed that the rules would be simple that's what I get lol. I'll comment on one now and I'll provide the link.

Edit: It's updated.