Bigray - Hustlin (Shook Ones Pt 2 beat)

[GreenHatOrangeBill]

The situation in that rap sounds pretty grim, it sounded like you were in prison or that not having any money is like being in prison. It got me thinking about my own life. Pretty good

[SliK]

You're definitely improving.

[CanadaPure]

Only CC I'd give you on this is to work on your end rhymes. I feel like you were fighting them a bit and lost it at times. I like the use of the subject matter though.

[tadpole25]

I do see an imporvement. I find the Nike Addidas line random unless I'm missing something, but overall, it's a solid rap. I give it an A.

[Kill You]

Pretty good bigray, keep it up!