what ya think bout it???????????????????????? :P

[sinemm]

i know thats not so good but i jus wrote what i feel and wanted to share with you

[color=violet]I was happy why did you come and made me unhappy?
I could feel good after a long time it didnt happen easily
But you ruined it and made everything so shitty
Im not okay im not relieved anymore dont you see?

I never understand why they are enjoying doin that
Why are they annoying me and makin me sad?
Breakin my heart and never look back
They dont even know me why are they all mad at me then
Im so sick and tired of that leave me alone and never come back

[yoshi]

it's very nice, i like the 2nd verse..

[sinemm]

heyy reallyy??
oh thanx alott its nice to hear that

[Coccoa]

Niiiiiice.....u into poems?

[yoshi]

heyy reallyy??
oh thanx alott its nice to hear that

yeah, really i'm not into deep poems, so i always admire people who can express themselves in such form

[katastrophe]

its really nice..i liked it

[sinemm]

umm yeah abit actually i usually write poems but they are ofthen into my own language..turkish u know.. but there are some in english too

[Mr. Cookie]

I liked it..... good rhyme....

[Coccoa]

Yeah it appears guzeli has it. Maybe she can write good hooks too.....

[sinemm]

ahh thanx alot for all u
well i can post here some of my poems in my own language if u want...

[Inzanity]

hey that was a really nice poem

[sinemm]

thanx alottt thats good for me hearin that from all you

[Coccoa]

Not that we will understand but post.