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Song About My Broken Turntable!

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Song About My Broken Turntable!

Postby Tomega » Sep 12th, '05, 19:56

[Chorus]
OH OH! The needle! The needle! The needle is broken!
C'mon bitch! The needle is broken!
There u stand as a dj ready for chokin'
C'mon man! The needle! The needle is broken!

[verse]
Where was i when my record just skipped
O yeah! I was performing when my manager flipped
And then! I noticed that the audience tripped
And damn! It took long for the needle was shipped
Well send! the fucking element in
Because! this is heavy like an elephant chin
Drive home with my 19 inch rims
And when i lay low! i slept for a day of ten
I felt sick without a turntable Ewrrrre
To get depressive was something i was scared off...
So i longed to the element with the needel on it
till then i puked till my house smelled like vomit
the needle wasn't about to arrive by plane
when i heard it took 2 more weeks, i didn't feel the same

[chorus]

[verse]
So i went to the store and i said:
i need a new needle immediately, coz indeed the needle seems a lil' weedy
c'mon free me, of my terrible feely, really otherwise i steel it
and the man behind the counter said
sorry man, where out of needles for sho'
i've looked for it, but we aint got em no more
Searching for that shit i came on the internet
I scrolled to ebay, but they didn't got anything related
I only needed one piece! IT's like a disease!
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 12th, '05, 21:38

that was good. i liked it.
are u planning to make an audio of it?
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 12th, '05, 22:51

dat shit was hot, but toooooo short, and this song reminds me of Bizarres - 'Let The Record Skip'
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Postby Tomega » Sep 13th, '05, 14:03

V-DogDaMenace wrote:dat shit was hot, but toooooo short, and this song reminds me of Bizarres - 'Let The Record Skip'


Im thinking of making the song longer and an audio version is kinda hard.
but i'll try
thanks
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