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Re: pewpewpew (SHOTS FIRED!)

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 31st, '13, 15:58

clever, good lyrics and punches... thanks for postin something readable
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: pewpewpew (SHOTS FIRED!)

Postby SliK » Feb 4th, '13, 10:50

I forgot I posted this. Thanks for reading it. For those who are interested, I am currently writing a new diss and it's brutal.
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Re: pewpewpew (SHOTS FIRED!)

Postby Kill You » Feb 5th, '13, 06:27

Yeah this was very clever, can't wait to see the new diss.
"I guess this shit took an unexpected twist like the neck of the fricken Exorcist!"

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Re: pewpewpew (SHOTS FIRED!)

Postby SliK » Feb 6th, '13, 07:09

The last 10 lines still make me chuckle.
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Re: pewpewpew (SHOTS FIRED!)

Postby SliK » Feb 6th, '13, 08:32

Geno I would tear you apart.
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Re: pewpewpew (SHOTS FIRED!)

Postby Blu » Feb 6th, '13, 08:51

Shawts shawts shawts
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