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Postby Inzanity » Jun 18th, '06, 11:29

that was really nice I liked it
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Postby rhiannon » Jun 18th, '06, 11:50

lol wow i really liked that it was really good :happy:
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Postby sinemm » Jun 18th, '06, 14:34

yea thats nicee :)
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Postby Coccoa » Jun 18th, '06, 14:52

Sarah...poor sarah.

If i was your teacher....ooohh poor Sarah.....you'd get a D.
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Postby Inzanity » Jun 18th, '06, 15:37

DJ Harlem wrote:Sarah...poor sarah.

If i was your teacher....ooohh poor Sarah.....you'd get a D.


y? it's a good poem
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jun 18th, '06, 17:52

DJ Harlem wrote:Sarah...poor sarah.

If i was your teacher....ooohh poor Sarah.....you'd get a D.


good thing you're not her teacher then huh? :whistle:






i thought it was pretty good......i also found the poem funnie for some reason :sweating:
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Postby Coccoa » Jun 18th, '06, 23:04

MuNxMuN wrote:
DJ Harlem wrote:Sarah...poor sarah.

If i was your teacher....ooohh poor Sarah.....you'd get a D.


good thing you're not her teacher then huh? :whistle:

i thought it was pretty good......i also found the poem funnie for some reason :sweating:


I aint HER teacher.
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Postby JuSnide08 » Jun 19th, '06, 00:55

i liked it

we had to write poetry in my english class also, but mine sucked.
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Postby Coccoa » Jun 19th, '06, 11:54

Sarah wrote:Thanks guys :flower:


DJ Harlem wrote:Sarah...poor sarah.

If i was your teacher....ooohh poor Sarah.....you'd get a D.

Meh lol....Not like I haven't gotten a D before.. :whistle:


Btw, it's a poem not a rap :p


Blondes dont get higher grades?? As a special treatment i mean.
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Postby Coccoa » Jun 19th, '06, 12:14

:confusion: :confusion:
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Postby Coccoa » Jun 19th, '06, 14:22

What u mean what?
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