bigray - Make Em Starve

[PAINKILLƎR]

This was good, it actually flowed nicely for me. Hook was alright, and so was the bridge. You still need to work a little harder on your end rhymes though, keep reviewing that Slim thread about rhyming. You're def getting better doe. Good drop doe

[Just Silver]

very nice seems like somethin we might end up with after the collab (i never forgot lol)

and i like the gangster category when done correctly

nice use of rhyme schemes to me it switched up more than normal