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bigray - Freestyle

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Re: bigray - Freestyle

Postby Just Silver » Feb 16th, '13, 19:02

i swear i saw alot of stuff from the multi cypher which was nice imo ineed to go back to that sec anyway

except idk why im picturing Riff Raff saying the chorus lmao but other wise pretty decent shizz

just too bad my name wasnt dropped lol :/
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Re: bigray - Freestyle

Postby CrashBand » Feb 17th, '13, 12:02

Your flow is choppy and everywhere, I struggled to flow everywhere, apart from the near tougher/rear bumper lines.

Sometimes, your word choice is obviously just for the rhyme. It's just a freestyle, so it's somewhat understandable but you definitely need to try and make less tenuous links with your rhyming words.

The narcissist/pharmacist/arsonist was a bit wtf. You need to make it more coherent.
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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