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[Blu]

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Beat:

Once again it's the, sick annoying Blu
Nobody trusts me cuz I'm always toying with you
I made a statement, now it's like I'm deploying a flu
Everyone's getting nauseous but I'm enjoying the view
Look at how my words impact, they're absurd, in fact
It's no secret that in an argument you will, get smacked
I treasure this shit, I get pleasure from it
I'm on another level you can't even measure my wit

[CanadaPure]

I was actually enjoying this, wouldn't mind seeing you turn it into a full 16 and maybe get some other people on it and do a full song tbh. Either way, solidly written. Room for improvement, but we all have that.

I liked it.

[Just Silver]

i like it though its extremely short

i like the enjoing the view line
overall nice little piece about making a statement

[Blu]

I was actually enjoying this, wouldn't mind seeing you turn it into a full 16 and maybe get some other people on it and do a full song tbh. Either way, solidly written. Room for improvement, but we all have that.

I liked it.

I'd be down for a collaboration with a few others. Really want to get back into writing.

Short and sweet and I really enjoyed this!

Thanks man, we should collab soon?

i like it though its extremely short

i like the enjoing the view line
overall nice little piece about making a statement

Yup, thanks man. Appreciate it.

[Blu]

Lol this was enjoyable haha

Thank you Menzo, this means a lot to me.