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Silver Living Flow

Postby Just Silver » Feb 16th, '13, 19:09

some older stuff Feed: Kill You-Tyler Durden *please copy and paste :sweating:




So quiet all i hear is my thoughts,in this year ,full'a darkness
Im stressed,and all on my conscience,my life is just nonsense
A product of being demolished before he was brought up
With no sense of conduct, it psyches me like Wanda
Enticing to wanna,fight for the ganja,light up and pondah
The white fucks a goner, im sick but no longah
Waiting for the flow,so im steady taking my own
Already taken an oath,to live to death though
But living so shitty to me is disrespectful
Figuring figures are only a death toll
And bank rolls just make clothes and cant be left so
I guess my next breath is to take those
That paper,that product and peso a-yo
My eyes are way closed im high with no float
Supposed to be living, had no chance though
Couldve got by on grants hoe but no stable home
Im here to make my own path better catch a loan fast
Started off broke ended up with no cash
Last edited by Just Silver on Feb 16th, '13, 21:57, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Deep Shit

Postby Just Silver » Feb 16th, '13, 19:20

bigray wrote:I would post the LOF for you but I cant I am not a mod.

I really liked this verse, I prefer to read a verse over a beat but this one was so easy to find ur flow on this.

Nice rhyming in this as well and I liked the content.

Good drop man :y:

thanks idk know why but i find i do better without a beat sometimes

and ya ill be ready for the SOF soon lol :y:
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Re: Deep Shit

Postby Sam. » Feb 16th, '13, 21:16

I like the flow more than the content. Not really a fan of the rhyming which were pretty basic, although it seemed that you tried some what. The flow was good throughout, but was disturbed in this line "Already taken an oath,to live to death though"; rest was fine. Work on the structure, man, pretty inconsistent.
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Re: Deep Shit

Postby Just Silver » Feb 16th, '13, 21:41

Sam. wrote:I like the flow more than the content. Not really a fan of the rhyming which were pretty basic, although it seemed that you tried some what. The flow was good throughout, but was disturbed in this line "Already taken an oath,to live to death though"; rest was fine. Work on the structure, man, pretty inconsistent.

yea im workin on flow thats prob why

and ive never been a perfect structure guy lol :sweating:

i got lots more in the works :b:
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Re: Silver Living Flow

Postby Just Silver » Feb 21st, '13, 00:07

last bump .. for this piece
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