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Creatively Controlling Cyphers ft. Eedee, Bigray, Painkiller

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Creatively Controlling Cyphers ft. Eedee, Bigray, Painkiller

Postby J.R. » Feb 19th, '13, 21:36

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Pain


I'm on the top of the totem pole, sayin random shit, crooked I,
nah i have skill, but that's your notice hoe, you a rookie guy!
look inside, you got no passion for rappin, our cypher delivers,
While yours, it just fizzles out, drizzles, cries and quivers,
Shivers and whimpers, we got four guys outta this league see?
Your cyphers a lizard compared to our snake, hand it off to eedee.

If you saw the TV, you'd understand where I'm coming from
Come here and give a brother bump, pounding your knuckles up.
Fuck, nothing's in my way, we're the sickest on this forum, yo
Look at all these horrid ho's wishing we were borin' though.
I'm surrounded by fuck-tards, who think that they all come hard
And talk stuff, and it's lame, but I guess I'll play sport, okay, so bigray:

EM said, grab a knife by the blade and stab you with the fucking handle
Ill jack a sharp sword, slit my wrist chew on it and spit blood right at ya
We stole the spotlight pass me the mic perhaps assault a dyke or a Ellen look alike
Leave her disfigured you heard you fat sloppy nerd don’t to be so concerned
I burn my right leg daily for fun, I’m bitter n psycho that’s how my left brain deliver
Luckily I won’t kill her, I prefer she incur a treatment and leave it to Painkiller

Holy fuck, it's my turn careful this might burn
Oh he stuck, why learn? fuck that, it's knowledge I earn
Fuck time! thrilling these drooling brats raw dog pups roughing 'em both
But I'm killing these pussy cats "Aww, naw" yup stuffed in the stove
"Well why you ramble nonsensical bullshit a lot?" "Cuz I can!
Hell try to handle this motherfucking buzz my man!" (I can't)
"Now dude, people might bitch about this, ya know?
"How rude, it's fun rest assured, nahmean?" "Uh... no?"
"Pfffft, like I give a fuck what anybody thinks" (fuck 'em)
"Give 'em a dick to suck and some naughty winks (uughhhhh)
Aww shit what a fucking trip day my friend (no shit)
Damn, might as well hand it off to bigray again

Amen! Now can I finally physically abuse some gay men?
Line them all up and tie them so they can meet my front end
After they dead ill rob them for they bread, shit there’s Ted!
Come back here! So I can shoot you right in ur fucking head
Slam you against the wall and stab you with this fuckin’ pen
Damn! Eedee take over this B, he’s coming at you its big Ben

And with this, I'm gonna spin shit and motherfucker, I will win,
And with every fiber in my being, a liar in my dreaming, I still sing
An anthem of my ancestors, a panther as I slam testers, the hills bring
A tougher challenge than a suffered habit on all you pricks, I kill this.
We see rain spillin', this day has came far, rip-ping out your lip-ring,
But Eedee, Painkiller, bigray and J.R. are in this buil-ding.

Kill things and kill the pain in my heart with a painkiller or two,
this drug makes me start to feel numb, still Realer than you!
You feelin me dude? Or do you feel a probe from an alien with a big-ray
Make ya asshole loose, Like eedee with a dildo, like jay said, "shits cray!"
"J.R. you a freak, a weirdo", this bitch must've made her last wish today!
Get a hot-air balloon and tie her by the poon to it, up up away!
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Re: Creatively Controlling Cyphers ft. Eedee, Bigray, Painki

Postby Eedee » Feb 19th, '13, 21:54

"Make ya asshole loose, Like eedee with a dildo"

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Re: Creatively Controlling Cyphers ft. Eedee, Bigray, Painki

Postby J.R. » Feb 19th, '13, 21:59

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Re: Creatively Controlling Cyphers ft. Eedee, Bigray, Painki

Postby Just Silver » Feb 19th, '13, 22:04

nice collab guys
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Re: Creatively Controlling Cyphers ft. Eedee, Bigray, Painki

Postby Just Silver » Feb 20th, '13, 01:16

should make a pt.2 id write
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Re: Creatively Controlling Cyphers ft. Eedee, Bigray, Painki

Postby tadpole25 » Feb 22nd, '13, 05:52

awesome collab. all of you did well, and i liked how it transitioned. very smoothly.

of all the verses, though, i have to say pain's verses were my favorite, well done overall.
"I take yall diss as endearment - I love it when I hear it
Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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