Untitled (46 Bars)

[Strictt Ame]

Track Im workin on..havent got a title for it yet cuz Im not stoppin at 46 bars..anyway, it over VTZ's "Fragile" beat..some real shit, kinda directed at a couple indiviuals, well fuck it, you figure it out!


Look lets keep it real, can I talk to ya now
Be in your presence, not feel awkward around ya
Not have to watch my step when Im walkin around ya
Not feel like death when your karma surrounds ya
Duckin and dodging, comin armed with a counter
Cuz you livin a lie, I feel honest without ya
But I promise you doubters, Ima grow this time
Get a focused mind and scope whats mine
Get the flow to rise to were ya hope to climb
Keep it increasing, show no decline
Its on me don’t wanna see the scars my shoulders hide
Ive been through the grind, lord knows Ive tried
Battled my deamons, now I cope with mine
But its for a reason, guess he sees some hope inside
Goin in fast forward, I got no rewind
And honestly, a lot of things blow my mind
Like how you fucked up, but still chose to cry
People who claim no regret have the most to hide
Open their closet, theres a ghost inside
No skeletons, the relevance of your demise
Im paintin a picture just close ya eyes
Wasn’t in my right mind when I wrote this rhyme
I was in the left one, show some respect son
Flow so cold that I bet you gonna catch one
Eyes Rosie from the Jane, higher than a Jetson
Im sorry that I lost ya, on to the next one
Hit the road but I wish you the best hun
If I aint got the answer why ask the question
As I make my way through this twisted world
With more ups and downs than a tilt-a-whirl
Head spinnin fast then my vision swirls
To the point this chick looks like six different girls
And Im thinkin they all cute, I hit on em all too
And hope to God I don’t get hit with a lawsuit
That’s what a broad do, thinking they caught you
Wanna cuff you up, and take you to court too
See to me that’s some trifling shit
And these people wanna know why I aint wifin the bitch
Cuz I aint likin that shit, give a fuck if you know me
You wont control me, let alone own me
Id rather be lonely still stuck in an old dream
One where I wake up and its just bitches and homies
Im sick of the phonies, you bitches can blow me
If ya got a fuckin problem wanna fix it then call me
I don’t pay by the minute cuz you gettin this long D
I give em what they want, tell them bitches get off me


Feed: Just Silver- Silver Elixir

[Just Silver]

pretty nice read some forced multis but almost impossible not to with a larger piece

flow was on point only problem was it was sorta bland can def tell this one was for Multis

overall i liked it def somethin id reread while smokin

[Strictt Ame]

Appreciate the feed..but believe it or not, theres a lot of truth and substance in this..hard to explain my situation, but come at it from an angle of talkin to 2 different ex-girlfriends..

And if you dont mind, what multis seemed the most forced to you? I can always revise before I record this and a fresh pair of eyes never hurt..

[Just Silver]

Appreciate the feed..but believe it or not, theres a lot of truth and substance in this..hard to explain my situation, but come at it from an angle of talkin to 2 different ex-girlfriends..

And if you dont mind, what multis seemed the most forced to you? I can always revise before I record this and a fresh pair of eyes never hurt..

i see ..ya i always had a tough time with writing about females lol

and cant really think of an exact multi but felt sometimes instead of the multi change of flow would be more interesting thats all

otherwise good stuff