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bigray - Round 1 Verse

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Re: bigray - Round 1 Verse

Postby CanadaPure » Feb 28th, '13, 01:12

Disqualified because Satan wrote 99% of the lines.
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Re: bigray - Round 1 Verse

Postby Just Silver » Feb 28th, '13, 01:16

lol i liked it as a whole but as a comedy piece not sure how judges will see it

depends on opponent but i can tell your automatically gettin a good amount of points
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Re: bigray - Round 1 Verse

Postby Just Silver » Feb 28th, '13, 01:23

bigray wrote:If you have been on this site long enough and you know me on here than it it funny but if you randomly read it it would sound more less comedic.

yea thats what it is cause with my hiatus i forgot most peoples mannerisms :sweating:
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but yea its unique how its a self diss :smoking:
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