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Postby Just Silver » Mar 2nd, '13, 03:18

Feed- Bigray Round 1 Verse *plz copy n paste


The worlds always moving and i can sense it
Not to mention, I make it rotate without censorship
Gave the switch i flip its a cold case , in a dark void place
Was annoyed at old ways so i found there was no pain
When there be no air in in this room its cool
Like swimming pools tracing of limbs three dimensional
Switching angles like Kurt wrestle with the wrath
Nestled in the path of spacecraft face that
No O zone but bet an Os gone
Pros and cons Trazadone flow gos and stalls
Rocket boosters at the bottom while we rise to the peak
A lot to do with, how i spit and write every week
Heisman of speech , equiped, air breach , ready to stampede
Visual landing with a mission no damn thing of news
Just hinting clues of people who claim to use
Same techniques as earth better keep it hidden,or burnt
I dont wanna hear these riddled rehearsals of how
Mankind can hurt you or how church is commercial
Its true but dont bother im outta my mind
A much better design is what you might find
Gravity is off never changing its grind
Plight flanger in time distortion reverb morphing
Reword stories of the scientifical orbif
Side split from the force of it organs quit
Better not go more into it no one reads my writen shit
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Postby Just Silver » Mar 3rd, '13, 20:51

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Postby Just Silver » Mar 7th, '13, 16:35

last bump bro
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Postby Just Silver » Mar 8th, '13, 02:35

thanks for the feed i got more comin and ya id write to beat sometimes but then id just have to say which beat cause i cant copy n paste so maybe i will next solo piece
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